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I've written this story on and off for months now, and I'd like know what a reader thinks of it. It hasn't gotten to the fight, as of yet, so you'll mostly be judging the writting and plot. https://www.scribblehub.com/read/33287-word-wise/chapter/90947/

The church was small and surrounded by white rocks. It was so bright out during midday, the shadows of seagulls were ink black to Fredrick's eyes, besides his own which sometimes wavered. White, thick grains of salt irritated his skin. More sweat attempted to come out of those pores, causing...

Are you liking the story so far? Would you like some new characters? Or is my grammar lacking? Place you opinion of our new world in this thread, and keep track of further releases.