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I receive the following suggestion in the comment section of my story on another site, but it's been on my mind now so I thought I'd get it out of my head and put them (them being thoughts) onto these forums: ******** comment/suggestion from a reader ****************** big sister big sister...

Here's the deal, I just started writing my story and have posted the first 10 chapters over the past 2 days. But today, I got inspiration and a big future plot for my story opened up before me. I decided to go back to chapter X and sprinkle in a few short lines that will foreshadow the big...