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  1. ciocelle

    Free First Chapter Feedback

    First off, I want to say thank you for your time. I'm glad you took a look and this review will be helpful going forward. That's fair, since I added the name after POV shifts as an afterthought. The story is going to switch between characters often, so I definitely need to fix that. That's...
  2. ciocelle

    Tell me your magic

    Magic is unique to every person and fits into two categories: Dark magic, which is inherent to those with demon blood. It's strengthened by negative emotions and tends to manifest into destructive/harmful abilities. Unlike its counterpart, dark magic evolves along with the user, usually when...
  3. ciocelle

    Free First Chapter Feedback

    I'd like to throw my latest work into the fray. There's some things I'm been wary about (pacing and clarity, for the most part) and I think feedback would help in making sure I'm on the right track. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/325643/devilish-journey/
  4. ciocelle

    First Cover

    Thank y'all so much, I'm going to make the second one once I get to about chapter 9-ish to show off some of the other characters!
  5. ciocelle

    First Cover

    Cover I drew for the first arc of my novel! I want to do a more dynamic one later, but this one works for now.
  6. ciocelle

    Who'd Like Some Reviews? Will read 10k or less stories.

    Thanks in advance! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/325643/devilish-journey/ What I'm currently struggling with is the pacing. I was wondering if it's too slow and wanted a second opinion on it.
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