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  1. Beta_Krogoth

    Unoriginal feedback request thread #575389 - BUT THIS TIME WITH SEX

    Hey folks, i've recently completed another edit of my story series Sweet Venom as i've submitted it to a competition. Me and my wife ran through arc one again and added some details, smoothed the writing and removed some of the cringe, it feels much better and i'm looking for feedback on it once...
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    Is it possible to add a new chapter between already published chapters?

    Hey folks, quick question hopefully! I've recently done a re-edit of my story series Sweet Venom's first arc and ended up chopping my first chapter in two and adding quite a lot to it to better pace the beginning, is it possible to add a new chapter between already published chapters? Or should...
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    "Sweet Venom" Art - Red, Black and Blue (BOOBS)

    Hey peeps, I got some more Sweet Venom artwork today, finally a scene from the story itself! Moltezz about to fry some people! She's got some huge booba. I know. She's 8,5ft so those booba are even bigger than they look. Booba. I love this piece though, she looks amazing!
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    The Baron Hunter

    Hey peeps! I got this insanely wonderful piece done today for my story series, Sweet Venom. I am absolutely buzzed, just stunning! Seeth has never looked quite so capable. Lots of little details in this pic too but I won't reveal anything. You can find the insanely talented artist here -...
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    A Pillar of Ruby and Flame (Heavy Weapons)

    Got a old character of mine revamped recently and i'm rather happy with the result! Say hello to the ravamped walking nuke, Moltezz!
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    A proper classy pair of alien babes (Heavy Weapons) - Venom and Rio

    I'm midway through updating a load of my older cast to better fit in line with my character design standards these days and these two have turned out beautifully! The artist absolutely knocked this one out of the park! Proud to share it! Rio (The cyan one) hasn't changed very much but Venom has...
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    Heavy Weapons Art Thread - Covers and Alien artwork

    Edit: Changing the title of the thread, going to use this thread as a showcase for some of my favourite artwork I've bought for Heavy Weapons. I've finally commissioned a new cover for my story after rewriting the first arc, as suggested by my fiancé and i LOVE how it turned out. You won't be...
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    Heavy Weapons - Sweet Venom Characters

    Hey everyone, thought i'd showcase some of my favourite artwork i've had commissioned of my characters, none of these were drawn by me but commissioned instead. I've got tons of artwork but a lot of it is NSFW so i won't be showcasing it here. Do enjoy though and let me know if you have a...
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    Help with branching character perspectives and tones

    Hey everyone, just looking for some advice on branching character perspectives, my story Sweet Venom has always featured multiple character perspectives and as I reach the end of the first arc i've hit a bit of a stumbling block, the first arc had roughly the same tone for everyones perspectives...
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    Completed the first arc of my rewritten adult sci-fi story - Looking for feedback

    Hey everyone, i've very recently finished the first arc of my story, it was a rewrite of a story I wrote years ago that started off as a porn story but rapidly developed into something better, trouble was I could never recommend the beginning to anyone due to it just being smut... The rewrite...
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    World building feedback - Sci-fi Faction report (Evil, dark, corruption)

    Hey everyone, I've been working on a world building document to go along with my fiction, written in the style of a official report published about the faction/affliction. I wanted an official sounding, SCP-esq. feel to it. I don't think I can port it onto scribblehub directly though as its...
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    Looking for general feedback on an action/drama sci-fi piece

    Hey all, i'm used to writing adult content and i've had a ton of characters that i've wanted to write about for ages. Its only got two chapters at the moment and whilst i've been writing for a while now, i've not done something more focused, would appreciate feedback, also looking to write about...
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    Writing Do niche fetishes help or hinder writing?

    Hey all, i'm having some musings and wanted to see what others thought. I'm mid way through rewriting an old storyline that I started over 10 years ago, with the main plot point hanging over a corruptive, sex obsessed faction. Its adult work and was always intended to be so, although initially...
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    Thought cascades - Room for world building?

    Hey everyone, i'm very new to scribblehub and my welcome has been warm so thank you all! I've been producing my own worlds and stories since I was kid (i'm reaching that dreaded three zero soon... ugh...) and I got dragged into the furry fandom when I was younger, although I was sensible enough...
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