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  1. unknownking

    a weird necromancer story

    since all the cool kids post links to their novels here, I thought of joining the club as well. My novel https://www.scribblehub.com/series/651911/a-necromancers-adventure/ It is basicly an adventure story, of a child necromancer whose minions are leagues above him, and therefore a...
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    Open ai, and using it to write fighting scenes.

    Hey, I haven't seen that many comments regarding using openai to assist one's writing, so here is a little experiment of mine, letting it write a fighting scene for me. I know it's quite a cliché fight. But I'm just experimenting with it. (It could also be that I'm just retarded and couldn't...
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    Spatial magic, magic system ideas.

    After browsing through different websites, I couldn't find any real space magic system building. I completely understand why most writers classify it as a high ranking magic, and be done with it, but I wanted to try something different. How would it look like if space magic was like any other...
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    I'm curious which POV you guys enjoy the most as readers and writers

    Feel free to explain your opinions
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    What's your opinion on an MC that betrays their comrades?

    I'm curious how others think of MCs that betray their former comrades or even outright sacrifice them, halfway through the story. For example Berserk through the eyes of Griffith.:blob_hide:
  6. unknownking

    made a stupid mistake.

    Ayo, I just made a stupid mistake. I've read through the forum and came across an interesting thread that was about "how to properly paragraphing and dialogue." I found it kinda cool and gave it a try, rewriting my second chapter. I ended up liking that more than my current dialogue style, as...
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    released a chapter and would like to ask for a reader's opinion on it. (fantasy, isekai)

    As I stated in the title I wrote a new chapter and would like to know y'all's opinion on it. Background information isn't really necessary. To keep it short: MC, the oldest brother of five used a spell above his level, a teleportation spell. It failed and yeeted each of his siblings into...
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    Feedback for my novel (Multiple-lead )

    Hey, as I stated earlier I wanted to ask if someone could give me some feedback on my novel, especially for my first chapter since it's the most important one. I've been uploading here for a while and have been wondering why most readers stopped after my first chapter and what they didn't like...
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