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  1. georgelee5786

    Interactive thread for envy

    @RepresentingEnvy here if this gets me banned you owe me your liver :blob_hide:
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    Fighters are old news, favorite bomber of ww2?

    (anything with bomber in the name is acceptable) I say Dauntless divebomber. More ships sunk than any other US aircraft
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    Screw zodiac signs, what ww2 fighter looks the coolest

    Precisely what it sounds like. F4U corsair for the win imoF
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    Did this count as diversity?

    Having a mute character who wasn't born mute but had his tongue cut out is technically having a disabled character, right?
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    Two questions

    I seem to perceive a trend in writing these days. Aristocrats and autocrats who serve as antagonists are portrayed as either flimsy and weak, disgusting and fat, incompetent, or overtly evil and cruel(Note I said antagonist rather than villain, as those are different things.). Am I seeing...
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    A question for BL authors

    ...why do so many of yall seem to be female? Like all the BL authors I know off the top of my head are female. Why?
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    Axecalibur

    Im not apologizing for wasting your time with this terrible pun (There's an image of me holding the axe but it won't compress enough for shf)
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    Unus(one for those who don't understand Latin[uneducated people/s]) chapter feedback

    So long as the story isn't smut, genderbender, boy's love, girl's love, eechi, or harem, I'll read the first chapter and give some very subjective feedback. I don't count prologues as the first chapter. I'll rate it on a scale of one agitated beaver(possibly high) to ten agitated...
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    Question

    Do you think someone who became immortal and no longer needed to breathe would keep breathing out of habit?
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    Little Question

    Welp, it is pretty simple. Do I end the story merely with the MC's funeral, or do I add a final scene of him in heaven with all the friends and comrades who died during his war to make the readers happy? The idea of the latter would be that the MC gets recompense for the hell he went through...
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    Recommendations Romance

    I want a regular romance where the female lead is in love with the male lead and is really nervous about it. Only criteria are that it is centered around the romance, no Gl, bl, gb, ecchi, or smut, and is on the shorter side.
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    Beneath the palace or in a mountain?

    If you had a secret chamber, would you hide it deep beneath your palace, hidden in a labyrinth of tunnels devoid of light, or in the hollowed out tip of a mountain, out of the reach of civilization. Granted, you could reach either easily because the caretaker of the chamber could guide you to it...
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    Romance or nah?

    Should I give the MC some romance or leave him to his trauma? The MC, the emperor, would be likely meet her at a party for the rich and high ranking lords. She would be a noble because that is a requirement to be the wife of an emperor. The point of adding romance would be to alleviate the MC's...
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    Suave Leader or Tyrant

    Let's say you read a story where the MC is the son of a lord. Do you think having the lord be a suave leader who cares for his people or a tyrant would open up more story opportunities? Which would open up more opportunities for the story? I'm asking out of curiosity and wondering which I should...
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    How do I wrap up this character?

    Once again, I've hit a brick wall in my writing. I have successfully wrapped up every character in a manner I deem satisfactory...except one. The MC(the emperor), commander-in-chief of the army, captain of the imperial guard, a potentially insane mercenary, and etc all have good endings. But i...
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    I need a reasonable explanation

    I have, once more, dug myself a hole and need a ladder to get out. My species, I use demons as a placeholder name, are innately superior to humans. They require less blood, less oxygen, less food and water, are less prone to illness, and rarely are with mental or physical impairments. They have...
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    Motto?

    I've gotten to the point in my story that I've finished all the major details. I completed the plot and character, and now they just need polish alongside finishing up some of the smaller details. One of those details is the flag of the Empire. More particularly, the writing on it. The Empire...
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    Angel or Demon?

    Been apprehensive about my main antagonist for a while now. At first, it was a vampire, but I realized that was stupid and boring so I changed it. I've become stuck between two options. A. Genocidal angel who was twisted during a war between the God and Devil, and now seeks to exterminate the...
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    Need help with an idea

    I'm wondering what meaning I could tie to the symbolism of an angel wrapped in chains. The predominant symbol would be having his wings tied behind him by chains, preventing him from flying, and chains running across his chest in an X. What would that mean in a Medieval society that generally...
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    Do I add 'and'

    My fantasy army's motto is, "Fight, kill, die," but I'm wondering if I should make it, "Fight, kill, and die." What do y'all think?
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