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found my prose by not giving a fuck anymore lol I felt so constricted trying to do something in a very deliberate, sort of scientific way. Then I threw that shit away, said "fuck the rules, I'll do it how I like it", and here we are. also carefully

Yooo thanks! It's interesting hearing different comments about the paragraphing/structuring. Someone else pointed out that it's weird that I have extremely short paragraphs. Given what you said, however, I think I really do prefer that sentence-only style* (well, not all of them are, but you...

Yooo thanks!! That's the kinda stuff I wanted to hear. And I'm not a furry either lmao, but it's fun to do different stuff. The exposition/thoughts thing is the main one I've worried about since like... ever, so that's good to hear that I'm still not doing too well on that front. And the...

Thanks! Yeah, describing the beast people was the first major hurdle I had to overcome, so good to know it's not exactly clear right away. I'd definitely prefer to make that natural in the story and not external, so I'll be thinking about that. And for your last point, thank you haha. That's...

As the title says. I've been writing in an echo chamber for a couple months and everything is looking alright to me. Which is a problem :sweating_profusely: Only got the first chapter up right now, and I'm planning on posting the rest once I finish my first arc. Any and all feedback is welcome...

I'd be super down for some feedback whenever you got the time Thanks! :D https://www.scribblehub.com/series/575432/ballad-of-the-peacekeepers-sun-of-the-beasts/

Whenever you got the time, please check mine out :D Any and all feedback would be great. Thanks! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/575432/ballad-of-the-peacekeepers-sun-of-the-beasts/

Aight, let's throw this in here. I'm fine if you respond here. Thanks in advance! :D https://www.scribblehub.com/series/575432/ballad-of-the-peacekeepers-sun-of-the-beasts/

Alright time to throw in my coin. Please give it a look :D Thanks in advance!

honestly i don't think passive voice is a problem in your work. I think you've got a nice blend between active and passive. There are some awkwardly written phrases, but 99% of what you've written is pretty good. I like that you're hiding a good amount of things already and building mystery. If...

Okay okay, first of all, this is amazing, the first one in particular. Next I’m curious, just like the guy above. I recognize the font to be from Campfire, but did you use photoshop or something similar to outline and decorate the actual map?

Oh, oh, oh this is a very good idea. I’d use a different number, considering I’ve already established the .5 as a side concurrent and related story. Thanks I’ll definitely be using this

@flucket Thanks man! So I've reuploaded everything, while also making some important minor changes. I feel that the best time for me to do the reworking of the old ones is either when I finish my current arc, or when I'm done with the entire story, and to be honest I'm really leaning towards...

And thinking about it now, you're right @flucket . Alright, I'm just going to stick with my guns. After all of this is done and my first sort of "volume" is complete, I'm going to go back and edit it, just like @RedPanda said. I'll figure it out. Thanks everyone for your replies.

Thanks @flucket! I'm really embarrassed that you remember that old mess up of mine (And this upcoming mess up too, which is an absolutely spectacular super yikes). So on your numbered points. 1. I would do this for some minor changes such as dialogue choices or setting descriptions, but...

Thanks guys for your responses! But I guess I kind of misworded my question. I’m 100% keeping the chapters I already have. I’m gonna build upon them on a separate file. I kind of meant in the Scribblehub sense of delete. As in completely remove the chapter on the site and reupload it. The main...

also I’m writing on mobile so please excuse formatting ugliness :)

Hey everyone So I’m kind of an extremely amateurish writer, and someone who gets pretty butt-hurt if I find something I don’t like in my previous chapters. Recently I’ve felt that something was off about my current writing, and found that I was extremely unhappy with how I handled the beginning...

Hey yo hey hey. I'd be willing if you'll have me. 'Cause I've heard about the benefits of having an Accountability/Reading partner. And I've been wanting a critique partner for some time as well (actually for a really long time, but eh) How about it? :D

Whoa, this is actually really interesting! I think I might just have to pick up your book. But, seeing as I'm busy at the moment, I can't :(