A cool way to differentiate telephatic or robotic dialogue from regular spoken dialogue?

Reyezwriting

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So, one of my stories contains a lot of telepathic dialogue, and I format it like this:

Regular dialogue. “That’s awesome!”
Telepathic dialogue. “That’s awesome!”

But italics is boring AF.
Do you have a better idea?
I also want to differentiate electronic dialogue, for when an android talks, or when someone is talking through a radio or something.

I wanted to use angle brackets, like this.

The android started walking. <<Follow me, please.>>
or
<<So, that’s the situation,>> the man said through the radio.

But it seems that these brackets are mostly used to quote inside a quote.

Any ideas? Have you seen something besides quotation marks in published works?
 

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To be honest, as long as your readers can understand it, it doesn’t matter. I personally like the italics.
 

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I personally like using this font for any stuff like that.

That includes scrolls
 

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I think an interesting way to do it, in a 1st-person "stream of consciousness" story, is to just have invasive thoughts appear in the prose.

However, one rule for non-spoken "dialogue" (oxymoronic) is that quotations mean people speaking. Just about anything works just so long as you aren't doing some goofy stuff like tagging dialogue or making it all-caps.
 

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So, one of my stories contains a lot of telepathic dialogue, and I format it like this:

Regular dialogue. “That’s awesome!”
Telepathic dialogue. “That’s awesome!”

But italics is boring AF.
Do you have a better idea?
I also want to differentiate electronic dialogue, for when an android talks, or when someone is talking through a radio or something.

I wanted to use angle brackets, like this.

The android started walking. <<Follow me, please.>>
or
<<So, that’s the situation,>> the man said through the radio.

But it seems that these brackets are mostly used to quote inside a quote.

Any ideas? Have you seen something besides quotation marks in published works?
C O L O R S
 

K5Rakitan

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Animorphs uses single angle brackets. I wanted to use those for my story as well, but fanfiction.net deletes angle brackets, so I went with «guillemets». They're basically double angle brackets, but they're a single character, so the brackets get closer together. I keep those handy in my notes document to copy and paste as needed.
 

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I would just write a description or two about how the dialogue sounds like, but nothing wrong with getting a little more creative. One thing to keep in mind, though: do whatever you want as long as it’s consistent and not confusing.
 

Sp4de

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In both of my stories I have AI that speak with brackets.
A slice of dialogue from my latest chap.

[We'll see how the dice roll. Anyway, go to sleep. It'll be easier to work when your body is more vulnerable and defenseless.]
"That's not comforting."
 
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