Fennel
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https://www.scribblehub.com/series/25359/npc/
This is the first "complete" story I have written.
I would appreciate any and all feedback, but particularly more so on the technical elements of my writing. Things like overall flow, pacing, or word choice/repetitiveness. I'm still trying to figure out how to translate my mental image of a scene into words and would appreciate any help. Thanks.
This is the first "complete" story I have written.
I would appreciate any and all feedback, but particularly more so on the technical elements of my writing. Things like overall flow, pacing, or word choice/repetitiveness. I'm still trying to figure out how to translate my mental image of a scene into words and would appreciate any help. Thanks.