Anyone interested in giving feedback for my first attempt?

melchi

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Gaming on a mud is difficult is about a character the author played quite a while ago. He kept a bit of a journal to remind himself of the roleplay and memorable moments. The system is loosely based on D&D (Some things in tabletop can be hard to code so...)

It has about 70k words. Not many people have left feedback so am a bit starved to know if I'm doing good or not.
 

Anon2024

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I'll add it to my reading list and only leave a review if I like it otherwise I'll DM you on SH or here. 70k words, we'll see how long it takes. I'll take a look once I'm done with my current chapter.
 
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