it would be great if a reader was prompted, after reading a couple chapters, if they would be interested to leave a review. I've published two books, and working on a new project, and despite several likes and ratings I've noticed no one seems to ever want to leave a review.
Open shilling and shamelessness is the way to go. NEVER attempt to win the business over the kindness of the readers. You see them as valued admirers of your art; they see you as another cattle on the farm to have content milked out of.
You want that review? Either plaster that shit onto their faces, or actively ask for it in this forum. Yeah, go to Story Feedback, make a thread, and cross your fingers hoping to get it. You might even need to review swap if you ever want it.
I've been posting my shit for two years and all I got for myself is 2 reviews. I've posted other works but they don't count; I literally asked for them on my knees with their dicks in my mouth. As for those said two reviews, I made shilling posts on the forum. Twice, to be specific. That's how you're gonna get any trustable feedback.
Other than that, unless you're writing the MOST POPULAR of genres and tags/posting every 2 days, you're shit out of luck. Quality of craft and networking, though somewhat interconnected, are as mutually exclusive as they get.
It isn't as hard as finding a crying crocodile but I wouldn't hold my hopes for it.