Author looking for feedback

Gedd

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Hola! I don’t know if this should be posted here, but I’m writing a story (link below) and looking for some constructive feedback/criticism. If you have a few minutes (hours) to spare, would you mind doing this stranger a favour?

I’m looking for feedback in terms of dialogue (how do you feel about the characters through dialogue?) and flow (is it too slow? too fast?), but any and all thought would be greatly appreciated (other than plot related—it’s a slow burn on that front but there’s a lot there you won’t know reading it up until the released chapters).

Have a good day! (:

 
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