[BL] Please let me know how I'm doing so far

[99blueroses]

Hello! This is my first time posting so apologies if I make mistakes. I posted 12 chapters of my story, If Destiny Fails, and I'd like to know how I'm doing so far.
It's a slow-burn romance set in omegaverse with fantasy elements.
Please let me know what you think. I appreciate all types of feedback.

 

[Tblew]

I only read the first chapter, but it's a really, really great start! You got a solid hold of your characters right off the bat, and I could paint a clear picture of all of them, which only made me want to learn more of them. Keep it up!

I do hope you are posting this story elsewhere beyond scribble hub. I know this site doesn't have a popular BL base. AO3 perhaps?

 

[99blueroses]

I only read the first chapter, but it's a really, really great start! You got a solid hold of your characters right off the bat, and I could paint a clear picture of all of them, which only made me want to learn more of them. Keep it up!

I do hope you are posting this story elsewhere beyond scribble hub. I know this site doesn't have a popular BL base. AO3 perhaps?

Thank you for the review, it's really motivating!
I also have this story on webnovel but never thought to post it on AO3. I'll follow your suggestion. Thank you again!