Can anyone review my novel? Even just a fast skim?

Deathilim

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Hello, I'm a new author. I wish to get more advice and criticism, but I barely get any reviews from my readers. Of course, I'm not blaming them nor am I saying that's bad.

If anyone that reads this thread, has enough free time and doesnt mind;


Can you review this? Note some of the bad parts I do so I can improve upon it. Thank you.
 

Ymadthepirate

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I'll probably look at the first two chapters and tell you what i think but im at school rn so you'll have to wait a few weeks at most
 
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