Chronomia is about an old man who wakes up as a young girl who... Has the power called [Game loop] tell me ways to improve!
Chronomia
What the rule(what you can do and can't do) for using this power [Game loop]? What the cost of using said power?
What the setting of said story?
- Physical setting(example: what kind of world, what kind of race/species in said world, the flora and fauna and etc.)
- Cultural setting(example: what the relationship between the races, what the politic, is there a war and etc.)
What the conflict the protagonist will face?
If you're looking for an advice:
Make sure your protagonist is proactive.
Careful on how you deliver the exposition.