Comedy? or Smut?

StrongArm

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right now im creating a bunch of one-shots, trying to find a genre i really love to write.
trying to find my soul as a writer ya'know?

Ive made a dark fantasy.
ive made a 1st person... dark fantasy.
A smutty superhero novel.

And im trying a new one called " I F*****g Love Demon Girls "
satan is yer frend.jpg

heres the synopsis:
A man is going on a journey.

A journey for righteousness.

A journey for vengeance.

A journey for love.

A journey for Red skinned Demon Booty!!!

Follow Jobe 'The Doom-Layer' on His quest to 'slay' all the Demonic Thots of The Netherworld!
Armed with his trusty BoomStick, The Doom-Layer will Rise to the challenge!
He wont stop until all Demons shake at the sound of His name!
The male Demons will hide in the closet & under the bed, for fear of Him!
His Title will be the Taboo on every Demon girl's lips!
The Doom-Layer does not know mercy, He does not know exhaustion!
He will never stop.
He cannot stop...

Warning! This novel contains such a high concentration of awesomeness, sex and violence that prudish people will explode upon reading it. "


Anyhow, the question i have is.... Can smut and comedy go hand in hand? or does the smut take away the impact from the comedy. and vice-versa.
Im still not sure of the direction i want to go with this one
 

SailusGebel

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hmmmm... Rom-com is not the direction i wanted to go with this one...
It doesn't matter. What I meant is that authors use comedy and smut at the same time. At the same time, readers read it and probably like it. In my, based on nothing, opinion, the majority of readers would prefer smut with at least some comedy elements, jokes, and so on.
 

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Smut authors usually use comedy/suspense/anything similar to make the smut more subtle and less frequent. Some authors completely skip r-18 scenes only hinting at it or probably doing side stories involving it. I at least don't want to read a novel with lots of r-18 from page 1. If the smut itself serves no purpose of progression or adds any comedic element to the story then there should be no reason for its existence in a novel.
 

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Just make it smut-comedy. Why choose one when you can combine action, smut, and comedy in one novel?
 

Ilikewaterkusa

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right now im creating a bunch of one-shots, trying to find a genre i really love to write.
trying to find my soul as a writer ya'know?

Ive made a dark fantasy.
ive made a 1st person... dark fantasy.
A smutty superhero novel.

And im trying a new one called " I F*****g Love Demon Girls "
View attachment 15473
heres the synopsis:
A man is going on a journey.

A journey for righteousness.

A journey for vengeance.

A journey for love.

A journey for Red skinned Demon Booty!!!

Follow Jobe 'The Doom-Layer' on His quest to 'slay' all the Demonic Thots of The Netherworld!
Armed with his trusty BoomStick, The Doom-Layer will Rise to the challenge!
He wont stop until all Demons shake at the sound of His name!
The male Demons will hide in the closet & under the bed, for fear of Him!
His Title will be the Taboo on every Demon girl's lips!
The Doom-Layer does not know mercy, He does not know exhaustion!
He will never stop.
He cannot stop...

Warning! This novel contains such a high concentration of awesomeness, sex and violence that prudish people will explode upon reading it. "


Anyhow, the question i have is.... Can smut and comedy go hand in hand? or does the smut take away the impact from the comedy. and vice-versa.
Im still not sure of the direction i want to go with this one
smut is a sin
 

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right now im creating a bunch of one-shots, trying to find a genre i really love to write.
trying to find my soul as a writer ya'know?

Ive made a dark fantasy.
ive made a 1st person... dark fantasy.
A smutty superhero novel.

And im trying a new one called " I F*****g Love Demon Girls "
View attachment 15473
heres the synopsis:
A man is going on a journey.

A journey for righteousness.

A journey for vengeance.

A journey for love.

A journey for Red skinned Demon Booty!!!

Follow Jobe 'The Doom-Layer' on His quest to 'slay' all the Demonic Thots of The Netherworld!
Armed with his trusty BoomStick, The Doom-Layer will Rise to the challenge!
He wont stop until all Demons shake at the sound of His name!
The male Demons will hide in the closet & under the bed, for fear of Him!
His Title will be the Taboo on every Demon girl's lips!
The Doom-Layer does not know mercy, He does not know exhaustion!
He will never stop.
He cannot stop...

Warning! This novel contains such a high concentration of awesomeness, sex and violence that prudish people will explode upon reading it. "


Anyhow, the question i have is.... Can smut and comedy go hand in hand? or does the smut take away the impact from the comedy. and vice-versa.
Im still not sure of the direction i want to go with this one
Buddy, I write nothing BUT comedy and smut, and people seemed to love em. Ya gotta understand, people like to laugh. And they also like getting horny. Why WOULDNT such a combination do well? Of course, that's under the assumption your comedy and ero are written good enough to elicit such reactions But yeah. Trust me, it can be done.

Well, I say smut but it's more erotica. I'm a man of quality, you see And smut, I find, is the lowest form of ero. All sex and no buildup, no anticipation.
 

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Buddy, I write nothing BUT comedy and smut, and people seemed to love em. Ya gotta understand, people like to laugh. And they also like getting horny. Why WOULDNT such a combination do well? Of course, that's under the assumption your comedy and ero are written good enough to elicit such reactions But yeah. Trust me, it can be done.

Well, I say smut but it's more erotica. I'm a man of quality, you see And smut, I find, is the lowest form of ero. All sex and no buildup, no anticipation.
I have no problems writing porn, im good at that. Comedy on the other hand... thats a bit more tricky
 

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I have no problems writing porn, im good at that. Comedy on the other hand... thats a bit more tricky
Meh, read some good comedy stories and do what they do. Depending on what kind of comedy you're going with. Konosuba is a good one.
 

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right now im creating a bunch of one-shots, trying to find a genre i really love to write.
trying to find my soul as a writer ya'know?

Ive made a dark fantasy.
ive made a 1st person... dark fantasy.
A smutty superhero novel.

And im trying a new one called " I F*****g Love Demon Girls "
View attachment 15473
heres the synopsis:
A man is going on a journey.

A journey for righteousness.

A journey for vengeance.

A journey for love.

A journey for Red skinned Demon Booty!!!

Follow Jobe 'The Doom-Layer' on His quest to 'slay' all the Demonic Thots of The Netherworld!
Armed with his trusty BoomStick, The Doom-Layer will Rise to the challenge!
He wont stop until all Demons shake at the sound of His name!
The male Demons will hide in the closet & under the bed, for fear of Him!
His Title will be the Taboo on every Demon girl's lips!
The Doom-Layer does not know mercy, He does not know exhaustion!
He will never stop.
He cannot stop...

Warning! This novel contains such a high concentration of awesomeness, sex and violence that prudish people will explode upon reading it. "


Anyhow, the question i have is.... Can smut and comedy go hand in hand? or does the smut take away the impact from the comedy. and vice-versa.
Im still not sure of the direction i want to go with this one
Japanese and Korean dramas have a lot of differences. Japanese dramas are usually about love and romance, while Korean dramas often involve a lot of action and suspense. Japanese dramas are also more realistic than Korean dramas. http://vikidramas.net Another difference between Japanese and Korean dramas is that Japanese dramas often involve supernatural elements such as ghosts and demons, while Korean dramas do not usually have these types of elements in them.
 

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Meh, read some good comedy stories and do what they do. Depending on what kind of comedy you're going with. Konosuba is a good one.
ive never actually watched konosuba... I hear good things and i see a lot of memes, but i just dont love anime like i used to...

on a scale of 1 to 10 (1 being shitty boruto And 10 being the G.O.A.T. Cowboy Bebop) what rating would you give?
 

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ive never actually watched konosuba... I hear good things and i see a lot of memes, but i just dont love anime like i used to...

on a scale of 1 to 10 (1 being shitty boruto And 10 being the G.O.A.T. Cowboy Bebop) what rating would you give?
Within its own genre, konosuba is a solid 10/10 right up there with Gintoki. Just less whacky. Don't expect any deep and immersive plot, it's not Bebop in that way. Like I said, in its own genre it's one of the best but you need to understand it's a pure comedy Isekai. Fantasy and adventure and everything else only act as supporting themes, it's not heavy on serious plotlines and world building.
 

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Within its own genre, konosuba is a solid 10/10 right up there with Gintoki. Just less whacky. Don't expect any deep and immersive plot, it's not Bebop in that way. Like I said, in its own genre it's one of the best but you need to understand it's a pure comedy Isekai. Fantasy and adventure and everything else only act as supporting themes, it's not heavy on serious plotlines and world building.
okay, next time im lookin for a laugh ill check it out, thanks.
 
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