Yiphen
Chaotic Lil' Demon
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I'm currently messing around with writing a prologue for my story, and it's reached the point where I'm looking for any sort of comments from an outside party. If there is anything you feel is a bit off, please let me know. The people described are meant to be vague since it takes place a while later, though I feel like it might be a bit too metaphorical.
So, if you read it, let me know what you think. Thanks!
So, if you read it, let me know what you think. Thanks!