ParadigmShiftress
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Rhythmic Love is a new fic that I started posting yesterday. I'm looking for critiques on the story. Are these first two chapters boring? Is the writing bad? I'm not too concerned about grammar issues because this has yet to be beta read and can be fixed at that point. I'm new to writing so any useful feedback you can provide will be greatly appreciated. Thank you :)
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