ajrunaway
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Hey all
I was wondering if anyone could give me some feedback on my story: Top Ten. I don't get very many votes/comments on it, so I'm wondering what the go is. Would love and appreciate some outsider/author feedback and what could be improved.
Please keep in mind it is classified as partial erotica, so if that makes you uncomfortable or not your cup of tea, I would not recommend reading.
Thanks!
I was wondering if anyone could give me some feedback on my story: Top Ten. I don't get very many votes/comments on it, so I'm wondering what the go is. Would love and appreciate some outsider/author feedback and what could be improved.
Please keep in mind it is classified as partial erotica, so if that makes you uncomfortable or not your cup of tea, I would not recommend reading.
Thanks!