Could use some feedback on the quality of my later chapters

MagicalDucky

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Hi, my story's decently long at this point (30 chapters as of the creation of this thread) and a while ago, I had to go back and edit my earlier chapters to add in dialogue tags/make them more readable in general, but after re-reading them, I honestly feel like my quality of writing has dropped a lot as time went on. To me, the old chapters just ooze out so much more comedy, charm, and personality, whereas some parts of my newer chapters feel like a drag to read... So I know this might be a lot to ask, but I was wondering if anyone would give me their opinion on whether or not my quality of writing has gone down recently compared to my earlier chapters. I want to know whether it's just me going crazy or if I'm actually starting to get burnt out.

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