RepresentingEnvy
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Welcome to the resident vampire's feedback thread
RepresentingEnvy here to give all of the mortals feedback on their novels. If you have stumbled across a feedback thread before, then you should understand. Still, I am here to give you the obligatory explanation. I will provide feedback on the first chapter of your novel, and if I enjoy it I might read further. Keep in mind that this will all be my subjective opinion as a reader first.Disclaimer
I am not a professional Reviewer/author. All of this will be my own subjective opinion. If you don't agree with my review/rating, you are free to dismiss it entirely. I am just a biased vampy.Rules
- I will provide feedback on at least the first chapter of your novel.
- You will put the link to the novel you want reviewed.
- You will tell me if you want the review in the thread or in a PM (If neither is specified the review will go in thread).
- Stories I won't read: Mind break, Mind Control, R*pe (Basically anything that doesn't involve consent in sexual acts. PS: This includes the sexualization of lolis.)
- The first score provided will be writing enjoyment (how much I enjoy your prose/style) on a scale of 1/5 . Example: Writing Enjoyment: (Max Score)
- The second score will be how much I personally enjoyed the story. This will be on a scale of 1/5 . Example: Personal Enjoyment: (Max Score)
- The last rating will be how much I think your story will appeal to a general audience. This will be on a scale of 1/5 . Example: Appeal: (Max Score)
Thread Closed
Bleh-Bleh, Bleh
Be patient if you want feedback.
Don't take my review as gospel.
Bleh-Bleh, Bleh
Be patient if you want feedback.
Don't take my review as gospel.
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