lacombe4545
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I am planning a mystery roleplay for my school performance, so I wrote this outline to see the mystery elements of my story. I need feedback on my outline on the logical correctness of the plot, and some holes in the deduction or in the plot. Any help about it would be appreciated.
Please take note that this outline does not show the actual script with dialogue and actions, only the parts needed to deduce the scene and the backstory. I'm sorry for posting this here even though it's not a chapter, or some dialogue. This is the only place on the Internet that I know of where I can receive feedback.
If this gets enough success, I may create a one-shot about it. If it gets even more success, I may create a detective series on scribblehub.
Please take note that this outline does not show the actual script with dialogue and actions, only the parts needed to deduce the scene and the backstory. I'm sorry for posting this here even though it's not a chapter, or some dialogue. This is the only place on the Internet that I know of where I can receive feedback.
If this gets enough success, I may create a one-shot about it. If it gets even more success, I may create a detective series on scribblehub.