eonovels
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Hello,
I'd love some feedback/reviews on a completed short story that I wrote.
It's centered around the relationship dynamics of the ML and FL. And follows the POV of the ML.
Please, don't read if you don't want your kokoro to hurt
You can find it on TapRead and also Scribble Hub. I'd appreciate if you could read/review it on tapread though. Scribble Hub tags will spoil the story, so please don't read them if you decide to head there.
Here's the synopsis (which isn't exactly a synopsis, but an excerpt)
I'd love some feedback/reviews on a completed short story that I wrote.
It's centered around the relationship dynamics of the ML and FL. And follows the POV of the ML.
Please, don't read if you don't want your kokoro to hurt
You can find it on TapRead and also Scribble Hub. I'd appreciate if you could read/review it on tapread though. Scribble Hub tags will spoil the story, so please don't read them if you decide to head there.
Here's the synopsis (which isn't exactly a synopsis, but an excerpt)
"Hmmm...Since you carried me out of the house, you should naturally carry me back in. Thinking of escaping the responsibility for your actions? That's wicked."
He grinned.
"Aye, love, I am so wicked. But only for you."
He grinned.
"Aye, love, I am so wicked. But only for you."
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