Owl
Nervous writer
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Hey everyone, I'm hoping to get some feedback on my BL story, as far as it goes right now :)
Here it is
It's a cultivation + rebirth type of story, with a MC who completely lacks common sense. It's rather fast paced right now, though I'm not sure if not too fast... Also a bit gory at the start, as a warning
Any feedback is very appreciated and if you have questions, please ask :3 I want to write the rest of the story while knowing what mistakes I did at the start and how to avoid them!
Here it is
It's a cultivation + rebirth type of story, with a MC who completely lacks common sense. It's rather fast paced right now, though I'm not sure if not too fast... Also a bit gory at the start, as a warning
Any feedback is very appreciated and if you have questions, please ask :3 I want to write the rest of the story while knowing what mistakes I did at the start and how to avoid them!