Feedback for my Novel - The Last Dukes' Memoirs

[ChronicleCrawler]

I would love to hear your opinions on how the heck could I improve my current novel. Okay, I admit that I tried writing it in pantser method. Any advice would be much appreciated. Although, I can personally see some issues. I'd rather have a third party to read it and find possible areas I can still improve on. Well, to at least avoided my very strong personal bias.

Thank you. Bows...

The Last Dukes’ Memoirs

As the youngest son of a Knight, Klive has to follow his family to the village of Lothar. Claiming the land awarded by the king, the compensation for their participation in the Monster Subjugations. Growing a small village into a city metropolis, they face unknown and monstrous threats whilst...

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