Trash Author, Know-It-All Reviewer
- Jan 25, 2021
If it wasn't for their way of spacing punctuation, I'd suspect you're the person leaving comments under all your chapters and a five star review...Oh, you like smut! Fellow smut lover! Hehehe... I like plot, too, though. So my story has a mix of both. But once the smut starts, it happens every chapter or so. Maybe with a 2-4 chapter break. If the story calls for it.
For you know plot/growth... Cuz... We need that too? Right? *Cough, cough* The chapter I am not so innocent 16, 19/26 Red moon both chaps. If I remember correctly, those are pretty spicy. *cough, cough* There are others, but I feel like those are the spiciest of the bunch.
Heheh... Technically, the age of consent is different for countries. For states it is 17-18, Canada is 16+ *I believe* UK 16+ too? Not 100% sure, but I know some of those countries have that age of consent. *That age of consent is also for them to sleep with adults, not within themselves.* I mean, I had a 13-year-old cousin get preggers. That was a shock but doesn't stop kiddos from having sex.~ *Sex Ed should be started at the age of 10 imo from what I have experienced. Hell, maybe even younger.*
Unless you mean 18+ all the time, but that is a preference.~ *Technically, this sometimes makes me go urg too. I mean, if the party is 18, and the other is 40, that creeps me out!* I am fine with a 10 year age gap though. *Can't be anyone's mother or father... Well, actually they can be the father of a kid... Maybe not the mother?* Uh, I am going down a hole!
Luckily, 6-8 is the only time they are technically minors of consent aging depending on the place one lives? But they both are minors so that is okay. In my other stories, they are always 18+ too~ Though for souls... Uh... Well? Smut doesn't start until chapter 9? I like to build a foundation before the sex.~ But this only applies to my stories. I don't do pure erotica/smut since I find it boring.~
I also tend to agree. Validation shouldn't be encouraged. How would get better if all we get is validation? We aren't perfect beings to be loved by everyone! We all have flaws.~ And guess what. That is okay, too. Even when we are utter idiots!
P.S. Sorry, I type too much. I know~
Just realized my response can be read very differently from what I intended.
The "Validation from internet strangers" referred to the
The article I mentioned was about writing sex scenes and advised against too many details.I don't enjoy erotica. Is that weird?
@.TheTrinary He admitted it!I'll be honest; I was simmering in the side, waiting to see if this would be a thread where they claim to review works and goes dead in three weeks. Turns out it's not; a rarity around these parts, to be honest.
Shiro believes he's been sent to the wrong school. Rormund Academy: home to only the best of the best. A school where only the wealthiest, smartest and most athletic students of the world reside. An establishment so exclusive even its name remains elusive to the public. Shiro exhibits none of...www.scribblehub.com
As of now, it's hovering at around <250k words. If there's anything I want to focus on, is a general rundown of anything I excelled/broke my ankles at along with how I can improve my pacing without sacrificing detail. I want to finally get a definitive list on what I'm good at, bad at, and dogshit at.
The story itself is a slow, character-centric drama piece with, well, animals as main characters.
I don't want to say furries, but yeah, furries.
Trust me, it's not on a whim I made 'em animals.
Just checked and I actually didn't pass the 3 week mark yet. Unless I should reconsider my impression of being good at maths, which is totally possible.
This not being the first attempt was to be expected, and hey, I took long breaks, too, before. So no guarantee it won't end up like that.
The last won't take too long, but I watched Trinary's review on yours before.
(None of this is to say I won't do yours, just to be clear)