First 5 chapters feedback exchange

RayVer

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I've scrolled through scribblehub story feedback page and have been noticing a lot of first chapter feedback schemes, which I think are good however are lacking when it comes to obtaining an overview of where a story is heading.

I thought that instead of doing a single first chapter feedback we could do a first 5 chapter feedback, as I believe that you can't always judge work from a first time chapter. Sometimes it will be stellar other times not. But that doesn't mean the story is bad.

I'm interested in doing something like this and if you are too then post down below.

My book link is here - https://www.scribblehub.com/series/295618/what-ive-become-a-vampire-loli/
 

ElliePorter

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Your story is so good. I cant stop myself from reading it! A vampire loli eh? Interesting...
 

BenJepheneT

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I've scrolled through scribblehub story feedback page and have been noticing a lot of first chapter feedback schemes, which I think are good however are lacking when it comes to obtaining an overview of where a story is heading.

I thought that instead of doing a single first chapter feedback we could do a first 5 chapter feedback, as I believe that you can't always judge work from a first time chapter. Sometimes it will be stellar other times not. But that doesn't mean the story is bad.

I'm interested in doing something like this and if you are too then post down below.

My book link is here - https://www.scribblehub.com/series/295618/what-ive-become-a-vampire-loli/
Is this deal still on? And is there a, uh, word limit?
 

Drakonus

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Aww man, my story kinda takes a lot more than 5 chapters to actually be interesting. The first 9 chapters of my story are pretty much in the prologue part of the story, nothing too major happens, and the real plot begins on chapter 10. But eh, why not? If you do find it interesting, then reading it until the latest chapter would be much appreciated!

Here's mine: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/180246/wormhole-to-another-world/
 

Jet

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Truthfully, gaining 500readers with 12k words is an achievement so staggering that I find it impossible to provide any critique.
 

Snusmumriken

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Truthfully, gaining 500readers with 12k words is an achievement so staggering that I find it impossible to provide any critique.
look at the tags:
these four are extremely popular nowadays on SH. Just these alone will bring in many.
 

Sairren

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I have given your five chapters a read and am currently working on a review.
 

SerikoLee

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You did something , i could not do.
500 and i only have 330 readers with 35.6k works.
 

Mr.Pan

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I've scrolled through scribblehub story feedback page and have been noticing a lot of first chapter feedback schemes, which I think are good however are lacking when it comes to obtaining an overview of where a story is heading.

I thought that instead of doing a single first chapter feedback we could do a first 5 chapter feedback, as I believe that you can't always judge work from a first time chapter. Sometimes it will be stellar other times not. But that doesn't mean the story is bad.

I'm interested in doing something like this and if you are too then post down below.

My book link is here - https://www.scribblehub.com/series/295618/what-ive-become-a-vampire-loli/

It has 5 chapters as of now. Just what i needed.
 
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