Discount_Blade
Sent Here To Piss You All Off
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Just got done reading the first chapter and gotta say...
I'm hooked.
Your writing style is pleasant to both the mind and the eyes, it paints a vivid and concrete picture of the setting, the character and the events. I personally enjoyed the various descriptions throughout the action scenes and the beginning was immensely effective in pulling me in.
No doubt, you've put a ton of effort into this work and I really hope you stick to it, I would love to read more works like this.
The synopsis and tags make it seem like it'll be interesting to read.S-H-A-D-E
The first story that I've posted here, or anywhere really in a couple of years now. Would love peeps to check it out.
Also, its Isekai/LitRPG
S-H-A-D-E
The first story that I've posted here, or anywhere really in a couple of years now. Would love peeps to check it out.
Also, its Isekai/LitRPG
Appreciate the read. I'll try to keep pleasing.Finished reading till Chapter 3. Thoroughly enjoyed both chapters and the start of chapter 2 did invoke strong emotions.
The effect of fatigue was nicely done and the tiny info tidbits from his VR gaming days were pretty well placed. I really liked that the MC isn't entirely strong from the beginning and the world isn't working exactly according to the game knowledge he had learned.
In all honesty, I believe your work to be entirely worth the read, especially for the 'apathy club'.
Please do update soon.