Somberpony
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First time here, would dearly like any feed back.
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Assurbanipal_II
Empress of the Four Corners of the World
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My first impression ...
Noir fantasy ...
Holy Church of Light ...
Something is definitely wrong here.
Somberpony
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Well, the rest of the paragraph might explain more.
Sabruness
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@Somberpony
Gave a quick squiz of the first 2 and a bit chapters. Objectively, just from what you've done so far it's interesting and there's enough things hinted at to stoke curiosity.
What tags and genres would this story entail?
Gave a quick squiz of the first 2 and a bit chapters. Objectively, just from what you've done so far it's interesting and there's enough things hinted at to stoke curiosity.
What tags and genres would this story entail?
ChronicleCrawler
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Your writing is already quite neat in my eyes. It's interesting and a good read for me. Just like @Sabruness, I'm rather curious about the genre of the story prolly because its title is noir fantasy.