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[jrise98]

I would love to get a little feedback on my novel!

The Devils Of The Biterrain

Tentative Upcoming Chapters: 9: Amongst The Borgia 10: Between The Fangs 11: The Docks 12: Marionette 13: A Just World 14: Glaucon Synopsis: Zavier is an unremarkable suburbanite living just outside of Seattle. He is finishing up his final semester of high school and preparing to go to college...

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If you can to it, I'd appreciate the effort to help a new writer out.

 

[Sairren]

Got my story cleaned up recently. Feel free to leave as fair of a rating as you like with stars and such. If it's low, just helps me find issues that need fixing. o wo)b

Drunks & Fanatics

Freshly anointed cleric Tessa Vivuk aspires to be a Hero after having been saved by one as a child. But when she attempts to join the Heroes' Guild, the doors are shut on her. Unwilling to give up, she joins the Adventurers' Guild and believes she can earn enough recognition...

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[Ghost_of_The_Fallen]

Arcane – A LitRPG Progression

Lindley Stormfire was enjoying his peaceful afternoon, when it was disrupted by a dragon riding warlock. The archaic wizard left Lindley for dead before killing his parents and the rest of the Waterpond villagers. Bent on retribution, Lindley embarked on a dangerous path to settle this debt of...

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[BluePheasant]

Being A Mage Is Boring, So I Created A Class For Myself

'This fucking world…sigh…' Tsuriyama Ryoki had an eye-opening experience, betrayed by the close ones he grew up with. It matured him, realizing how fucked up the reality is. He no longer remained the happy go lucky kid, creating a thick wall around himself. 'If only I could be...

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[SparklerMan]

Please do give a review for my story ^^, I hope you like it.
Chaos: Another World Betrayal

 

[mesa]

Hello new writer here, if you could give some C&C with some stars and a nice review that would be much appreciated! I am still struggling with the tables and formatting on this platform! I am writing a LitRPG series! Thanks ;)

[LitRPG] A Record of Ash & Ruin: The Grieving Lands [Stubbed]

[Stubbed]] Book 1: The Grieving Lands will become available on September 19th on Kindle and Kindle Unlimited and published by Royal Guard. How much would you sacrifice to slay the gods? Gesthe is a world where the whims of gods and magic hold sway. Cruel and capricious gods force mortal...

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