Hi, I'm Stephen
- Nov 23, 2020
Would keep reading.Synopsis: Guy is, well, a guy. He lives in a World, and has many stories to tell about it. The World has many different kinds of women, and Guy has stories with them too. You may or may not enjoy Guy’s stories, but if you feel like it, Guy himself will be more than happy to tell you about them. I...docs.google.com
as promised, the first chapter for that smut I've been working on
it's a bit long, though
You won me over with your first sentence. And listen, I've read so much of your stuff at this point. You're a great writer fundamentally and you really only suffer from a lack of editing and condensing. However, you've made up for that with an abundance of ideas. The thirty pages don't feel like thirty pages when you've got five different stories elements being brought up. By the time God was introduced, I was just like, what?
I know I've talked down on that sort of thing in the past (like my last video) but it works when you devote enough time to each element and none of them clash.
I think you're 7/7 for positive reactions at this point. Maybe 6/7, that chicken one dragged.