b1ah
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So this month, I decided to write up a story about a person who travels to another world after death through being rejected by gods and devils. I thought to myself, what if I make the main character genderless? That way, the reader can put themselves in the character's shoes any way they please. Then I thought to myself, rather than creating a 3rd person perspective of all the characters, why not instead make it first person? This feels... Awkward to write... I've released 18 chapters with roughly 1800 words per chapter (around a 5 min read per chapter). I've created a dynamic between the protagonist and another character only the main character can see/hear, adding a comedic effect. So... My biggest issue is feedback, or the lack thereof.
How does the idea of a genderless protagonist and this 1st person approach sound?
Does this kind of 1st person writing style create a limited perspective as a reader?
If anyone can read a few chapters and provide some feedback, that would be really helpful. The main goal is for the readers to put themselves in the shoes of the main character... I'm not exactly a writer, and this is my first web novel/story. I really appreciate any help you can provide.
The Uprise of a Nobody | Scribble Hub
How does the idea of a genderless protagonist and this 1st person approach sound?
Does this kind of 1st person writing style create a limited perspective as a reader?
If anyone can read a few chapters and provide some feedback, that would be really helpful. The main goal is for the readers to put themselves in the shoes of the main character... I'm not exactly a writer, and this is my first web novel/story. I really appreciate any help you can provide.
The Uprise of a Nobody | Scribble Hub
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