Give me some motivational feedback on how to improve my story.

Lord_Drakonus

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Anyways, here's my novel:

 

RuyaDuppy

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Im trying to be motivational dont take it completely to heart
its probably shit honestly. doesnt matter if you are good or bad its probably shit BUT
You can fix that. write each chapter faster than the last, get ahead of yourself. make each character not 2d and give important characters arcs. people wont read it. heck you wont read it. but your next novel will be great.

Advice now: yh character arcs are important. staying like 5 chapters ahead of what you release IMPORTANT. Being able to write a chap each day important. your chaps can be 3-5k words making it doable in a few hours. If you increase your wpm writing will be easier for you and can go back and edit what you do. Id say write a chapter and edit it. then before you post it edit it again and change the story so it fits the next chapters you have in a more flowy way.
But thats what i learned dk if it will help you
 
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