GreyJackass
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So lately I've been reading a manhwa called Weak Hero (there's also a live-action series from Korea, but it's not as good as the manhwa).
Story-wise, it was pretty standard (teenage arguments, bullying, and silly conflicts between groups of thugs). But, it was the fight scenes that drew me in.
It was so intense, brutal, and real. Not real 'real', but it was something that made you think, "Why hasn't anyone done this before?"
The MC is the kind of person who doesn't hesitate to use dirty means to win. For example, when fighting three guys who ambushed him after school, he beat them with a belt; a pencil; and a tie. He only stopped when his enemies were almost dead or battered.
I tried to recreate the fight in writing, but it always felt like it was missing something and seemed contrived.
Is there a way to effectively create an intense fight scene?
Story-wise, it was pretty standard (teenage arguments, bullying, and silly conflicts between groups of thugs). But, it was the fight scenes that drew me in.
It was so intense, brutal, and real. Not real 'real', but it was something that made you think, "Why hasn't anyone done this before?"
The MC is the kind of person who doesn't hesitate to use dirty means to win. For example, when fighting three guys who ambushed him after school, he beat them with a belt; a pencil; and a tie. He only stopped when his enemies were almost dead or battered.
I tried to recreate the fight in writing, but it always felt like it was missing something and seemed contrived.
Is there a way to effectively create an intense fight scene?
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