Anti-Jarron7
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There's this girl in my novel who likes to smoke and is quite the delinquent. And while I was writing one of her inner monologues I wanted her to convey her desire to smoke a bit because of boredom. But I don't know whether the way I was going to write it was correct or I'm just writing strange things.
Is the phrase: "-*Sigh*- I really want to take a smoke now..." correct?
Or am I maybe saying that she wants to ride a cloud of smoke?
Help me, please (;-_-)ノ
Is the phrase: "-*Sigh*- I really want to take a smoke now..." correct?
Or am I maybe saying that she wants to ride a cloud of smoke?
Help me, please (;-_-)ノ