Writing How to write ecchi?

RaySizm

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Title. I am trying to write a satire-comedy, and for the sake of making fun of the works that I am parodying, I must learn how to write ecchi by the next chapter I put out. I never thought my life would ever come to this point. My parents must be so proud of me.
 

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Protag walked to school today. He has brown, messy hair, and carries a yellow sling bag.

He met Sam at the school gates. Sam is very voluptuous and sexy. Her boobs are huge, her cleavage bursting from the seams of her buttons. Her shirt was very wet, drenched in sweat. Her hair is short, the fine strands caressing the nape of her neck as beads fell from the tip. Her cheeks were flushed, her pink eyes gleaming seductively at Protag. Her slim hips flowed bountifully to her thick thighs as they ballooned around the sides of her fishnet stockings. Her legs were long and slender, yet pulpy with tension.

"Ah, Protag-san!"

She ran towards Protag but tripped on a crack on the road. She inexplicably flew upwards and landed breast first on Protag's face. Her sweet scent filled Protag's head as his mouth tasted something salty and throbbing.


Here's your prologue bro
 

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typical
I wanna know more so imma lurk
 

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Protag walked to school today. He has brown, messy hair, and carries a yellow sling bag.

He met Sam at the school gates. Sam is very voluptuous and sexy. Her boobs are huge, her cleavage bursting from the seams of her buttons. Her shirt was very wet, drenched in sweat. Her hair is short, the fine strands caressing the nape of her neck as beads fell from the tip. Her cheeks were flushed, her pink eyes gleaming seductively at Protag. Her slim hips flowed bountifully to her thick thighs as they ballooned around the sides of her fishnet stockings. Her legs were long and slender, yet pulpy with tension.

"Ah, Protag-san!"

She ran towards Protag but tripped on a crack on the road. She inexplicably flew upwards and landed breast first on Protag's face. Her sweet scent filled Protag's head as his mouth tasted something salty and throbbing.


Here's your prologue bro
...jesus, your gal looks like a stripper strapped for cash. And way too thicc for god's sake.
 

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...jesus, your gal looks like a stripper strapped for cash. And way too thicc for god's sake.
If that's what excites the author, then it will excite someone else as well. Whatever you do, write about things/people you like. Your passion will show through your work that way.
 

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It always mystifies me how language can be suggestive without being right out smut. When there is a manga it is clear, shows the chests and suggests parts and things but you could easily write that scene describing all the bits it would be just in PG-13 instead of the wink nod extra level of lewd.
 

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If that's what excites the author, then it will excite someone else as well. Whatever you do, write about things/people you like. Your passion will show through your work that way.
Nope, don't want to get arrested by the lolice.

Jokes aside, I am shit at describing people, my MC James in particular, He looks like an average farmboy, with a forgettable face that gets lost in the crowd, a height only slightly taller than the average by a forehead and biceps as big as a man's thigh. Shoulders wider than the common folk, back rippled with muscles, the only notable thing that stands out is he has scars on his face and body like those struck by lightning. Judging from his callused hands, wrinkled face and white patches sticking out his black hair, it reflects the arduous lifestyle that is the commoner's struggle in such times.
 
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Ecchi, if I understand the meaning of it right, is like Pinup.

You're creating an image of a beautiful woman. So focus on the image, and the way you want the viewer to feel about it.
 

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Write a chapter with plenty of awkward sex between two virgins that are nervous about their clothing. Then on your second pass, remove the sex but keep the awkward gestures and nervous clothes tugging. Add a few blushes as well.

Ecchi is a promise to build up to smut, a promise the author never intends to keep, even 200 chapters later.
 

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Write a chapter with plenty of awkward sex between two virgins that are nervous about their clothing. Then on your second pass, remove the sex but keep the awkward gestures and nervous clothes tugging. Add a few blushes as well.

Ecchi is a promise to build up to smut, a promise the author never intends to keep, even 200 chapters later.
An expert detected.:blob_hide:
 

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Write a chapter with plenty of awkward sex between two virgins that are nervous about their clothing. Then on your second pass, remove the sex but keep the awkward gestures and nervous clothes tugging. Add a few blushes as well.

Ecchi is a promise to build up to smut, a promise the author never intends to keep, even 200 chapters later.
Eh an ecchi is a promise. Curse you original novel writers! You write ecchi but no smut! You monsters
 

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Write a chapter with plenty of awkward sex between two virgins that are nervous about their clothing. Then on your second pass, remove the sex but keep the awkward gestures and nervous clothes tugging. Add a few blushes as well.

Ecchi is a promise to build up to smut, a promise the author never intends to keep, even 200 chapters later.
At this point ecchi is like a very prolonged cockblock designed for those who're in a porn hangover.
 
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