Hows my first chapter?

Spoopytagedie

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I'm a newbie author who took a break to try and improve my writing. I understand that it still isnt the best but I would like other people opinion.

If anybody's willing I just ask that you be honest as I really do wish to improve as a writer.

Here is the link.


The idea for this was supposed to be a horror action with a heavy emphasis on the supernatural but because I suck as I writer the two chapters I posted were absolute trash.

I edited and combined them to make a single 1,700 word chapter. I figured it should be fine since It was to improve the overall quality.
 

K5Rakitan

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Yep, it's pretty solid in terms of quality. Not my cup of tea personally, but keep up the great work!
 
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