- Jan 1, 2019
Well, boys love is kind of unpopular nowadays, but doesn't mean it had no chance to be in spotlight. Yours, however, has a long way to go. The title and the premise aren't interesting. The synopsis and the first chapter also need some improvement. You do have popular tags among BL readers like QT and reincarnation, but those problems I mentioned might still hinder your readership.Well..
I will post my synopsis and teaser her.
My first chapter is describing about the world.The story is yet to reach.
I welcome your advice..
it may be confusing. the story is the life of mc and ml and side characters in different worlds.
Quick transmigration and Quick reincarnation, romance, slice of life, tragedy, boy's love are main genres.
This transmigration and reincarnation is not like usual. Mc will not possess anyone's body. Cause mc and ml are supreme souls in high realms. They don't have body. They creates thier own body.
Now, tell me?
They were two lonely souls.
One was the reason for everything ......
While the other found 'him' as the reason.
His blood red eyes looked up to the sky.. His sharp gaze pierced through realms. But, he couldn't get a glimpse of him...
After a moment, demonic power surged from him. He crawled up from the hell and wreaked havoc in the worlds he saw. He became hated, feared and cursed by billions of people..
All was for...
His birth was the most majestic. In the highest realm, taking up millions and billions of years, he was finally formed. With his enchanting blue eyes, he hatefully stared at the ferocious demon..
"What do you want actually? "
Finally he spoke!!!
He spoke to me!!
The demon said nothing. Just looked at him lovingly. His mind overflowing with satisfaction..
"I only had one last wish, Yi "
He slowly said.Suddenly he moved backwards.. The corrosive thick demonic aura surged from his body.
The angel's pupil constricted.
He rushed to the demon and caught him by hand.
The demon weakly laid in his hands. Cracks appeared in his demon spirit body..
"I LOVE YOU LITTLE YI !!!"
That was his last words...
'To die from your hands..that was my final wish Yi. I am sorry.. If i get a chance without this cursed destiny, i will openly pursue you. But that will never happen. It is also good to never love me. You won't be sad if i disappear forever.. Right?? "
His soul scattered..
In his place, a black hole appeared..
Slowly, very slowly, he (angel) reached with his hands towards the black hole..
-Millions of billions of years passed....
Finally, The memories in the black hole ended.
Suddenly, he cried...
He cried in heart wrenching pain....
"Is it truly late??? "
Is it truly late??
Read the story to know more..
DARE DEVILS😈×👿 background infoWarning: Too much crap in first 3 chapters... **** In short, this is the story of a egosick daring gods, the divine angel Yi Lan Wei and the cursed dark demon angel Mo Yin Xing's journey to get (to acknowledge) each other.www.scribblehub.com
Less than 100 readers by chapter 30.
There are lots of ways. You can make main characters female and have them love each other. Or better yet, the hero was actually a male before. Maybe sprinkle some sex scenes too. You see where I'm going?What do you think I should change to make them more likely to be popular?
Although, there are ways that won't necessarily sacrifice your dignity as a writer. But, I won't tell you in this thread lol