I can predict whether your story will become popular or not

[Anon2024]

I just wanted to come back and say I beat your prediction by 1 reader

*pats self on the back*
But quite an accurate prediction so kudos.

 

[MatildasBT]

try this one: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/487974/lost-from-the-wrold-wonderin-through-the-stars/

 

[Hathnuz]

try this one: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/487974/lost-from-the-wrold-wonderin-through-the-stars/

Sorry, but the story seems to have nothing new to offer. Reincarnating more than once has been done many times before -- at least you can add more twists to the gimmick. The premise is also cliched. The first chapter, however, is alright.

Lastly, fix the title because otherwise you'll lost potential readers.

Less than 100 readers by Chapter 30.

 

[PeacefulMyst]

The premise is a bit bland -- reincarnation alone won't carry any story. Also, most readers won't care what problems the protagonist will face because it's not what they're specifically looking for. The title is weak; 'perhaps' as a word lacks certainty along with 'maybe', 'probably', etc. You should avoid using that word unless you know what you're doing. Everything else is fine.

Aight I took your suggestions in account and edited the synopsis and the name. (Heck this even ended up making me rewrite tons of shit) And im proud of it all... Except for the title in which I give up. (As none of them fit my story) Anyways thanks alot.

 

[Lorelliad]

I'm feeling a bit masochistic today, so do mine please!

RE: All From His Seat

They say Krodoa is very much alive. 'That' planet of magic, home to countless races and supernatural phenomenon. This very world is set to undergo an enormous change as Michael, a human from Earth, is reincarnated into the body of a baby.

www.scribblehub.com

 

[Hathnuz]

I'm feeling a bit masochistic today, so do mine please!

RE: All From His Seat

They say Krodoa is very much alive. 'That' planet of magic, home to countless races and supernatural phenomenon. This very world is set to undergo an enormous change as Michael, a human from Earth, is reincarnated into the body of a baby.

www.scribblehub.com

At first glance, the story seems like a generic isekai until I read the first chapter. The narration is unique for sure, but I personally don't think it'll work with the premise. This kind of narrative voice is better suited for multiple protagonists, but that doesn't mean you should stop doing it. Maybe you can prove me wrong, who knows.

Everything else is fine.

Less than 100 readers by Chapter 30.

 

[Lorelliad]

At first glance, the story seems like a generic isekai until I read the first chapter. The narration is unique for sure, but I personally don't think it'll work with the premise. This kind of narrative voice is better suited for multiple protagonists, but that doesn't mean you should stop doing it. Maybe you can prove me wrong, who knows.

Everything else is fine.

Less than 100 readers by Chapter 30.

I'll take it! That's already a better review than my first story lmao

 

[Anon2024]

I'll take it! That's already a better review than my first story lmao

Now your goal is to be more than 100 readers by chapter 30 and come back and say you beat his prediction lol

 

[Lorelliad]

Now your goal is to be more than 100 readers by chapter 30 and come back and say you beat his prediction lol

I failed the first time, second time is definitely not a charm lmao

 

[Anon2024]

I failed the first time, second time is definitely not a charm lmao

Improvement each time is good.

 

[BoundLess]

what about mine? I really want someone to give feedbacks on my novel because it's my first-time on doing actual webnovel (the other one is just for fun)

The Power-Shifting Ability is Convenient Even in Another World

Shin Soru and a beautiful girl named Mitsuha Reika were getting tired of this tedious world. While standing on the rooftop and watching the city below them, Reika accidentally fell from the rooftop and accidentally pulled Soru along! Suddenly, a pillar of light hit both of them, saving them from...

www.scribblehub.com

 

[Hathnuz]

what about mine? I really want someone to give feedbacks on my novel because it's my first-time on doing actual webnovel (the other one is just for fun)

The Power-Shifting Ability is Convenient Even in Another World

Shin Soru and a beautiful girl named Mitsuha Reika were getting tired of this tedious world. While standing on the rooftop and watching the city below them, Reika accidentally fell from the rooftop and accidentally pulled Soru along! Suddenly, a pillar of light hit both of them, saving them from...

www.scribblehub.com

Well, you got me curious with that title. Even though the premise (arguably) is overdone, the story is promising just because of the MC's unusual ability. Most importantly, it reeks of overpoweredness which is great for readership.

The first couple of chapters are interesting and I like how self-aware the story was. My only pet peeve was the abrupt pov switch, but that's just very minor nitpick.

150-400 readers by Chapter 30.

 

[BoundLess]

Well, you got me curious with that title. Even though the premise (arguably) is overdone, the story is promising just because of the MC's unusual ability. Most importantly, it reeks of overpoweredness which is great for readership.

The first couple of chapters are interesting and I like how self-aware the story was. My only pet peeve was the abrupt pov switch, but that's just very minor nitpick.

150-400 readers by Chapter 30.

Ohhh! I expect more criticism but this makes me more determined to continue!

btw I don't understand wdym about the story being "overdone". If you could, please specify.

and yeah, i'll fix the sudden change of POV.

Thank You for this feedback! i'll make sure to improve my writing skills

 

[Hathnuz]

btw I don't understand wdym about the story being "overdone". If you could, please specify.

I meant the part where getting isekai'ed due to the goddess's summon. Maybe overdone isn't the right word, just have been done many times.

 

[BoundLess]

I meant the part where getting isekai'ed due to the goddess's summon. Maybe overdone isn't the right word, just have been done many times.

Oh, well I couldn't think of anything, though. I want to introduce the villain at the early stage so that the revenge trope would be executed HAHAHAAH. but there's nothing I could do

 

[melomarl]

I'm not really looking for large views but this thread made me curious. Surprised this thread is still active. Give it a go? Lmao this honestly feels like a tarot reading, writing edition.

Click here. TIA

 

[Hathnuz]

I'm not really looking for large views but this thread made me curious. Surprised this thread is still active. Give it a go? Lmao this honestly feels like a tarot reading, writing edition.

Click here. TIA

Lol I guess you could say that except I don't use cards, crystal balls, or whatever.

I think transmigration stories are still popular, but yours seems to be very plain. Without any twist, the premise is already too ordinary for most SH readers. The first chapter is fine.

Less than 100 readers by chapter 30.

 

[melomarl]

Lol I guess you could say that except I don't use cards, crystal balls, or whatever.

I think transmigration stories are still popular, but yours seems to be very plain. Without any twist, the premise is already too ordinary for most SH readers. The first chapter is fine.

Less than 100 readers by chapter 30.

I see. Is nice to see/hear objective response after my two-year break in writing. Alright then, I probably should edit some things in the synopsis. Been years since I edited it. Thanks! Appreciate this lots

 

[BluePheasant]

Okay, let's hear my future prediction, Psychic-sama. Here is my novel~
https://www.scribblehub.com/series/450244/being-mage-is-boring-so-i-created-a-class-for-myself/

 

[IgorRSAW]

I was Reincarnated as a GIRL and received a list of Tasks… WTF?

'Where am I?' I realized I was in a movie theatre where a man with a long white beard watched a movie. No, was that my family? That's me in a coffin?! 'Hey, you, what's that?!' I ran toward the man while pointing at the screen. 'Hohohoho, that's...

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