I've just started my first novel and would really like to have your opinion on it.
Title: Threaded Skies
Synopsis:
"Our sole purpose is only to oversee and protect the progress of those who remain..."
Hiraine wakes up in the steampunkish 'Anchor World' with large gaps in his memory and a letter somehow sent by himself. As he get's used to life in this strange fantastical world, he meets a 'spirit' which refers to herself as an A.I called 'Euqa' who helps unravel his fogged up past. However this only helps him realize one thing. His life is merely a thread that is deeply intertwined in a patchwork of other lives and the mysteries surrounding two worlds.
Tags:
Alternate World Amnesia Appearance Changes Aristocracy Artificial Intelligence Character Growth Childhood Promise Corruption Delusions Discrimination Dreams Fantasy World Fast Learner Gore Guilds Heterochromia Human Weapon Interconnected Storylines Interdimensional Travel Kingdoms Magical Technology Multiple POV Secret Organizations Spirits
first chapter:https://www.scribblehub.com/read/300449-threaded-skies/chapter/302522/
Title: Threaded Skies
Synopsis:
"Our sole purpose is only to oversee and protect the progress of those who remain..."
Hiraine wakes up in the steampunkish 'Anchor World' with large gaps in his memory and a letter somehow sent by himself. As he get's used to life in this strange fantastical world, he meets a 'spirit' which refers to herself as an A.I called 'Euqa' who helps unravel his fogged up past. However this only helps him realize one thing. His life is merely a thread that is deeply intertwined in a patchwork of other lives and the mysteries surrounding two worlds.
Tags:
Alternate World Amnesia Appearance Changes Aristocracy Artificial Intelligence Character Growth Childhood Promise Corruption Delusions Discrimination Dreams Fantasy World Fast Learner Gore Guilds Heterochromia Human Weapon Interconnected Storylines Interdimensional Travel Kingdoms Magical Technology Multiple POV Secret Organizations Spirits
first chapter:https://www.scribblehub.com/read/300449-threaded-skies/chapter/302522/