Carpio
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Okay, so I got a break from studying and came on the forums. Since I saw another guy doing this, like the roman impersonator I am, I'm copying them. Now I want y'all to criticize my stories without insulting me. Also if you can be more direct about what needs fixing, that would be great.
Also just saying, I do need to rewrite the first few chapters of Villainess so please don't be too harsh on those. I already redid the first chapter, so that's fair game.
Dark Hero of Music
'So tell me why you chose me out of like 30 people?' 'Unlike them you know two things. The look of death and how to kill.' When a class is Isekai'd, Lila is the only one chosen to represent the demons as their dark hero. Facing overwhelming odds, she,...
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Why Did I Reincarnate as the Villainess?
Ivana reincarnates into a new life, realizing later that she is the villainess from a secret route in an otome game. She wants not only to change her future but to protect everyone around her as well. She answers a call to arms from the king asking for their household's...
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Also just saying, I do need to rewrite the first few chapters of Villainess so please don't be too harsh on those. I already redid the first chapter, so that's fair game.