b1ah
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Hi all,
I was hoping someone could help me out here. I've written 26 chapters of 'The Uprise of a Nobody' and I'm thinking it may be a little messy. The entire story starts off from the MCs perspective with internal thoughts. Later on, it switches to an external non-character perspective (around chapter 18). Also, the gender of the MC has not been defined meaning that the reader decides the gender of the MC subconsciously. The personality of the MC is also a little of a mess. I'm getting to the point where I should probably end the story. If someone could provide feedback for any areas I can improve to save the story, that would be much appreciated. I think a readers perspective will really help me.
Rather than ending the story, I think I'll try to save it first but rewriting it a bit differently. Thanks in advance...
I may be overthinking this... A second perspective will be of help nevertheless!
I was hoping someone could help me out here. I've written 26 chapters of 'The Uprise of a Nobody' and I'm thinking it may be a little messy. The entire story starts off from the MCs perspective with internal thoughts. Later on, it switches to an external non-character perspective (around chapter 18). Also, the gender of the MC has not been defined meaning that the reader decides the gender of the MC subconsciously. The personality of the MC is also a little of a mess. I'm getting to the point where I should probably end the story. If someone could provide feedback for any areas I can improve to save the story, that would be much appreciated. I think a readers perspective will really help me.
Rather than ending the story, I think I'll try to save it first but rewriting it a bit differently. Thanks in advance...
I may be overthinking this... A second perspective will be of help nevertheless!
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