BenJepheneT
Light Up Gold - Parquet Courts
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As the title stated, I've been working on this for quite a while. Done concept art, made outlines, revised the plot a couple times before making the thing itself.
It IS smut, but it isn't entirely so. Of course, the kithing is still the main focus, but instead of just raw dogging there's character moments and world-building (yes, there's that) and action thrown in between.
It's my first foray into the genre. My only prior experience are doujins I've read during my "down bad" moments.
Any and all feedback is appreciated.
Warning: the whole thing is about 12k words long, but it's supposed to be sectioned to about 4-5 parts. I won't blame you if you don't read the whole thing. But hey, if you do, you have my utmost gratitude.
It IS smut, but it isn't entirely so. Of course, the kithing is still the main focus, but instead of just raw dogging there's character moments and world-building (yes, there's that) and action thrown in between.
It's my first foray into the genre. My only prior experience are doujins I've read during my "down bad" moments.
Any and all feedback is appreciated.
The Problem Store Alpha 0.1 [first night]
docs.google.com
Warning: the whole thing is about 12k words long, but it's supposed to be sectioned to about 4-5 parts. I won't blame you if you don't read the whole thing. But hey, if you do, you have my utmost gratitude.