IK both are horrible but...which cover would you choose, if you must?

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IK both are horrible but...which cover would you choose, if you must?

  • Blue One

    Votes: 27 75.0%

  • Green One

    Votes: 9 25.0%
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Story for a comedic effect. Just an idea for now...

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For me, Blue is more organized, focused, and pleasant to look at. It's cute. Green on the other hand, hurts my eyes with its chaos.
 
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ToastedStarfish_SweetFilledHoney said:
Story for a comedic effect. Just an idea for now...

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The blue one. First, I find that the title is better. Instead of merely saying "Yo I transformed again" it lets the reader ask themselves, "Wait, what did he transform into?" with the way its phrased, bringing their sense of curiosity to click the story. Second, I like that the graphic kinda looks like the "evolution of humans" thing. Overall, it just seems neater, and yet more eye catching.
 
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LotsChrono said:
The blue one. First, I find that the title is better. Instead of merely saying "Yo I transformed again" it lets the reader ask themselves, "Wait, what did he transform into?" with the way its phrased, bringing their sense of curiosity to click the story. Second, I like that the graphic kinda looks like the "evolution of humans" thing. Overall, it just seems neater, and yet more eye catching.
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Thanks. "Low and Behold, I have transformed Into a..." was my original title but I changed it because I thought it'd be too long. But then again I have seen a lot of long titles on SH and NU... the shortened version of the title doesn't really emphasis the comedic effect of the story too..

Interesting. Thought the blue one looks really childish compared to the green one. I'll take note of that though. :)
 
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ToastedStarfish_SweetFilledHoney said:
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Lowkey still like the original better o_o maybe it's the guy and the color? lol the blue guy looks so happyy + the color is so on point :D plus the relative simplicity of the original cover makes the cover look cuter than having more animals in the new one.. and I think I like the center alignment more for the title

take all this with a grain of salt tho it might be just me
 
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Blue one looks like a kid's book. The green one, although it doesn't have any real unifying theme, it is more dynamic in that the figures are facing multiple directions, they are occupying different areas of the fore and background, they are arranged in more interesting ways, and they are presented with different expressions.

I think people voting for the blue one are voting for that unifying theme. I voted for the green one because of everything I said in the above paragraph. If there's some way to mix in a unifying theme to a design similar to the green one, I think that would be best.
 
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