I'll give feedback, too!

[SirDogeTheFirst]

You are free to destroy me anyway as you want.

Emperor Of The North - Prolouge: From A Depressed Life To An Alien World | Scribble Hub

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[TheTrinary]

Forumn regular you say? Anyway, here's my story: https://www.scribblehub.com/read/554511-the-dark-element/chapter/557826/

 

[BenJepheneT]

you guys are still holding onto hope?

 

[CKJ5]

you guys are still holding onto hope?

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Nope

 

[kumarpreeta]

Since top 5 threads in this section are various people forum regulars offering warranted feedbacks, I thought I should jump on bandwagon too and offer my expert analysis for any budding novelist(to crush their hopes and help them find a better hobby, of course!)


I will read one chapter of your story. I will tell you what I liked or disliked about the story, and point out flaws in grammar if I find any.

Then if I like it, I will read more!

Sounds good, eh? Eh?
I have no limits, so hit me up with fucked up shit.

But if you get offended by my honest opinions, then don't ask me again.
Oh, and mind that I am just a human (though I am working on my eventual ascension to daemonhood) so I have my own biases and preferences, and nothing I say is ever gonna be 100% objective.

Won't attack you. I'm new to writing, though, so go a bit slow, yeah?

I had already written 12 chapters and published them all in one go today. I'll keep updating after this, though. Please give me some constructive feedback. If there's something you feel is not right, do tell me how I can make it better. Thanks in advance!

The Ravaged City

The story is set in 1970, in the fictional setting of the city Randordam in the country Baldornan. Film critic Edna Garson is assigned as a war correspondent to cover a border conflict, which involves the military, including her sister, a Deputy General, and a mysterious General, who is going...

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