KingMusa
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Hey can you guys please give me some feed back on my story? I'm not sure how it's doing since I haven't gotten any feed back from anyone and it's not doing well in the comment, view or like section. So I really need a feedback to know. I'll post the synopsis and a link to the Story, please check it out! It only has 6 chapters!
Synopsis:
[Crime, Violence, Corruption, and DREAMERS. Those are the four traits that make up the cyberpunk city known as "Yoko City, the City of Sleepless Dreamers". Yoko City is part of the Galactic Kingdom being one of its main districts, but also its worst district. Despite Yoko City being deemed as an incredibly dangerous city, it's still an incredibly busy city with a large population that keeps increasing. People come to this city to make their dreams a reality by any means necessary.
Since Yoko City is such a crime-filled district, Special Jack of All Trades companies has become one of the most popular and high earning jobs. This story is about the members of Dreamers Paradise and the odd jobs they accept. Although it mainly revolves around Marcus who is kind of the main protagonist other members will have their own chapters where they will be the main lead.
Marcus Jévon. Kingston is a reckless daredevil who takes part in the illegal and extreme sport known as "Sky Racing". His dreams to one day be the best Sky Rider!
When Marcus isn't racing or doing whatever youthful people do nowadays, he's out taking on all sorts of odd jobs with his mysterious power known as "Origins".]
Synopsis:
[Crime, Violence, Corruption, and DREAMERS. Those are the four traits that make up the cyberpunk city known as "Yoko City, the City of Sleepless Dreamers". Yoko City is part of the Galactic Kingdom being one of its main districts, but also its worst district. Despite Yoko City being deemed as an incredibly dangerous city, it's still an incredibly busy city with a large population that keeps increasing. People come to this city to make their dreams a reality by any means necessary.
Since Yoko City is such a crime-filled district, Special Jack of All Trades companies has become one of the most popular and high earning jobs. This story is about the members of Dreamers Paradise and the odd jobs they accept. Although it mainly revolves around Marcus who is kind of the main protagonist other members will have their own chapters where they will be the main lead.
Marcus Jévon. Kingston is a reckless daredevil who takes part in the illegal and extreme sport known as "Sky Racing". His dreams to one day be the best Sky Rider!
When Marcus isn't racing or doing whatever youthful people do nowadays, he's out taking on all sorts of odd jobs with his mysterious power known as "Origins".]
Yoko City: Dreamers Paradise
Crime, Violence, Corruption, and DREAMERS. Those are the four traits that make up the cyberpunk city known as 'Yoko City, the City of Sleepless Dreamers'. Yoko City is part of the Galactic Kingdom being one of its main districts, but also its worst district. Despite Yoko City being deemed as...
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