- Jul 27, 2020
I have a fast paced novel I wanted to know if my oc character has enough oomph you know and some thoughts on my writing this is my first novel,and criticism on general and my twist I did in chapter 5
Join the adventure of Damien by the oldest trick in the book, sleight of words. In his pursuit of power he ready to lose an eye who knew he would bamboozled and his voice would be snatched. Follow his journey in the Hard mode: magical world, though danger lurks in...