Puppetboi
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I've taken up writing as a hobby recently and decided to post online as I do want to improve and I know that if anybody can give good criticism it's the internet.
Anyways I plan to make the first arc more or less an introduction to ideas, systems, people, and overall themes. I've tried to keep it entertaining but I think everything would work better if I focus more on setting a clear mystery and world instead of starting off with fights.
Would that be fine for the the record I've released 4 chapters so far.
While I'm at it what else could I improve on other than the pace. I understand that the starting pace has been iffy.
Anyways I plan to make the first arc more or less an introduction to ideas, systems, people, and overall themes. I've tried to keep it entertaining but I think everything would work better if I focus more on setting a clear mystery and world instead of starting off with fights.
Would that be fine for the the record I've released 4 chapters so far.
A Demon’s Ordinary Survival Story
The protagonist is an ordinary guy. He goes to school, then he works, then he studys, and then he relaxes. Yup nothing strange. Except maybe one thing. Since he was five he'd have night terrors every night where he would be tortured by a blob of grey goo attached to...
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While I'm at it what else could I improve on other than the pace. I understand that the starting pace has been iffy.