Eleven_M.A.
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Frankly... Yes, I find it quite awkward. Others made some very good points, but my biggest issues are related to grammar, vocabulary and language. There are few bits that make me scratch my head and wonder: "Wait, did I get it right?"
I have a longer bit of feedback, actually, and it got pretty nipticky as I wrote it. I'm not sure if you appreciate that sort of thing, so I thought I'd ask you before I post. Also, if you're interested, would you like me to post it here? I don't mind sending it in a PM, if you're more comfortable with that
I have a longer bit of feedback, actually, and it got pretty nipticky as I wrote it. I'm not sure if you appreciate that sort of thing, so I thought I'd ask you before I post. Also, if you're interested, would you like me to post it here? I don't mind sending it in a PM, if you're more comfortable with that