I've written the closest thing I can come to a Misery Story. Give me some feedback?

Tim_Saian

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So it's not as bad as RE: Zero where subaru is literally killed every single time. But it is pretty sad and unfortunate. My MC is just really hungry.
The title is Hungry Necromancer and it's literally just as it says. MC has chosen to be a necromancer but despite the pretty cool pick he just finds himself endlessly hungry and thirsty. Of course I don't plan for this to be the running gag for the entireity of the book, eventually hungry won't be so literal, but right now I'd really appreciate some feedback on what I've written about Asher and his journey so far.
 
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